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Stephanie, you are doing a good job examining the problem here! As you revise, concentrate on the following steps.
1. Add a clear thesis statement. The thesis should include your proposed solution.
2. Focus on the organization, focusing on one main idea per body paragraph. First address the high rate of teen pregnancies before examining the why and the various negative consequences.
3. Omit the questions from the body as you concentrate on providing the readers the answers. While you may have these questions, work on answering these for your audience.
4. Finally, avoid speaking directly to the readers, omitting the second person pronouns (you/you). At this point, you will primarily be writing in the third person point of view. Let me know what questions you have as we continue. (

Reducing Teen Pregnancy Are you a teen parent? Do you know anyone who is? If so how do you see their life compared to when they were not a teen parent? Big difference huh, that is because becoming a teen parent is not as easy as people say. Becoming a teen parent practically ends your childhood. There are many difficult times; you give up a lot of your teenage years to be a parent. Teen pregnancy has been around since a long time ago many people have tried to reduce the amount but have not been successful. Why? Why can’t teens be care free and not have to worry of being sexually active and instead enjoy their teen years? Whether it is planned or not being a mother is not as easy as it looks. The number of teen pregnancy is the highest in the U.S. Why are teens being sexually active at such a young age? According to Guttmatcher Institute, young people have sex for the first time at about the age of 17. Thinking back to how our parents lived back in the day, they believed to be sexually active you would have to initially marry that person before doing anything with them.…...

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